Hey uh, I noticed something that seemed a bit incorrect in the story. (spoilers:)
I think you mixed up the meowstic genders in the evelyn's scene after her former pet got given the potion? like i checked some pokemon wikis and stuff just to make sure, and the mainly dark blue meowstic with the white fur tips and blue/green eyes are the males, and the ones with mainly white fur and blue fur tips, with red and yellow eyes are the female ones? like idk if you just mixed them up, or if in your world its in reverse colors compared to the official pokemon designs, or if the meowstic also swapped the genders of both of them when turning evelyn or something? just wanted to ask. or maybe i misremembered evelyn's pet being darker blue? cuz i played again and now its definitely a girl meowstic,so i'm not sure if i just misremembered, or maybe the gender is random, or what?