A well-crafted game with great atmosphere. The gameplay is simple but intense, and nothing feels incomplete or unpolished. Also, mad respect for the protagonist for being able to take 10-minute naps under mounting pressure.
Now excuse me as I put on a diaper and try True Night mode
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This is a much more faithful translation than LocJAM's sample version, and the creative elements were a nice surprise. However, I found it not quite as good in terms of readability and presentation. A lot of sentences clearly inherited their syntax from the French original, appearing less like sentences, but more like fractured clauses littered between jarring commas and periods.
I feel like things as simple as some well-placed conjunctions could do well to "oil up" this piece and make it flow better. Maybe also check out LocJAM's English version now that the JAM is over? I found its language style something to learn from.
Overall, GJ, cheers! :D
I think I did something wrong during submission and the project uploaded didn't show up in the list of entries. I already asked in another thread, but for now I'll post it here in case nothing else works.
https://guochenzi.itch.io/larrestation-darsne-lupin
First time in a jam here, sorry for not knowing my way around :'(

