It was overall a good experience, but here is whats lacking:
1. Artstyle is inconsistent due to difference between assetpacks, which is common in jams or school projects. Understandable compromise, however it must be corrected if the visual was to have a upgrade.
2. It lacks any checkpoint sign. Which isnt really that big of a deal with the short run time. But it would be nice to know where checkpoint is.
3. There should be variations of tense music. Which plays at different occasions like the fake out in the tunnel. Or else it sounds a bit plain. I could not confirm if the music varies at all.
4. Lack of a menu screen.
5. The credit is off position and cant be seen in the web version.
6. Better cinematic experiences. An example of this would be a short cutscene. Even ppt would work wonders.