im so invested!!!! cant wait to see how it all comes apart! i adore all the UI layouts and sprites. the writing is really really good! i especially enjoyed sierra's part :)
God this is SO good and I'm looking forward to the full version!! Vtuber collectives are RIFE with potential drama and I'm so excited to see where this goes. Also BB Wolfclaw, you're an EXPERT at writing Weird Women, so I'm always hype to see you start exploring new characters....new strange women to meet...yayyy!
All the characters have different and subtle dynamics. They're very online. I am also very online, so this is great for me. The dumb little crushes...the resentment...stupid jokes masking something much deeper...
The contrast between their online personas and IRL selves is really interesting, too. Admittedly I had to do backwards and re-read parts because I genuinely wasn't sure who was who.
The UI on this is beautiful, and the shifts between different layouts (discord call to NVL text to streaming) keep the whole thing super exciting and dynamic.
Also I love that librarian side character I want to be her friend....
very exciting demo, I feel like the intro (and general overbearingness of edens inner monologue) drags but i really love the flow of the game as it goes on. sierra and jun are so goddamn cute. the contrast between biscottis "ditzy spiral" persona and her attempts and failure to do that same routine irl is so good. the forum and stream shit is sickening, i love it. showing highlights of these streams (and how each fanbase edits them differently) is very fun. i love the obs windows being as much of a solid lived-in space as the places these 3 live and work. hope to see more.
Mae, thank you so much for reading and leaving such a thoughtful comment! The structure has been a tough balancing act since this is my first prose work, the narrative rhythm is just entirely different to comics, its actually very reassuring to hear someone notice the 'flow' at all (positive & negative) since it is very important to me. Cheers!
Goddamn this was so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Solely design-wise I'm very amazed at the UI work and at how well the Discord interfaces along with the vtuber lives sections & boards are inserted in the story. The animated transitions betweens sections are very stylish, they made me think of Suda51's games a bit.
The dialogue and premise are just so good and fun too, and so is the art (though I might be biased by how she's my favourite yet, I adore Biscotti's 'model' in particular, her expression is so cute)... I've enjoyed your comics and storytelling for years from afar silently, but this is on a whole another level.
The demo already gives a good look on the cast but I was so hungry for more when reaching the end lol (greedy). I'll be patiently looking forward for more <3
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im so invested!!!! cant wait to see how it all comes apart! i adore all the UI layouts and sprites. the writing is really really good! i especially enjoyed sierra's part :)
I love how raw the writing is,, very honest and straight to the point. I'm so excited to see more ^o^!
God this is SO good and I'm looking forward to the full version!! Vtuber collectives are RIFE with potential drama and I'm so excited to see where this goes. Also BB Wolfclaw, you're an EXPERT at writing Weird Women, so I'm always hype to see you start exploring new characters....new strange women to meet...yayyy!
All the characters have different and subtle dynamics. They're very online. I am also very online, so this is great for me. The dumb little crushes...the resentment...stupid jokes masking something much deeper...
The contrast between their online personas and IRL selves is really interesting, too. Admittedly I had to do backwards and re-read parts because I genuinely wasn't sure who was who.
The UI on this is beautiful, and the shifts between different layouts (discord call to NVL text to streaming) keep the whole thing super exciting and dynamic.
Also I love that librarian side character I want to be her friend....
livestreaming has to be made illegal.
very exciting demo, I feel like the intro (and general overbearingness of edens inner monologue) drags but i really love the flow of the game as it goes on. sierra and jun are so goddamn cute. the contrast between biscottis "ditzy spiral" persona and her attempts and failure to do that same routine irl is so good. the forum and stream shit is sickening, i love it. showing highlights of these streams (and how each fanbase edits them differently) is very fun. i love the obs windows being as much of a solid lived-in space as the places these 3 live and work. hope to see more.
Mae, thank you so much for reading and leaving such a thoughtful comment! The structure has been a tough balancing act since this is my first prose work, the narrative rhythm is just entirely different to comics, its actually very reassuring to hear someone notice the 'flow' at all (positive & negative) since it is very important to me. Cheers!
Goddamn this was so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Solely design-wise I'm very amazed at the UI work and at how well the Discord interfaces along with the vtuber lives sections & boards are inserted in the story. The animated transitions betweens sections are very stylish, they made me think of Suda51's games a bit.
The dialogue and premise are just so good and fun too, and so is the art (though I might be biased by how she's my favourite yet, I adore Biscotti's 'model' in particular, her expression is so cute)... I've enjoyed your comics and storytelling for years from afar silently, but this is on a whole another level.
The demo already gives a good look on the cast but I was so hungry for more when reaching the end lol (greedy). I'll be patiently looking forward for more <3
Thanks Milefeuile for such a nice comment!! Suda51 is high praise for my after effects XD
Can't wait to share more!! The next part has quite a lot of Biscotti 👍
this is so scary (positive) oh my god
thanks hehe!
this rules, looking forward to more!!
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interesting!!!